JKAsiege

Don't post and ask for opinions if you arn't open to them (wheter they are good or bad). Some people here said your poem wasnt bad.

However, My opinion was and still is that your poem blows and needs to be reworked.

Well Played@Wafflz

And as for my personal thoughts on this poem?
As English isn't your native tongue, I give you some credit.
However, this was awful. There is no excuse for this.